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She walks as if she knows
Each secret in my thought,
For not a furrowed brow on her face
Can prove that she does not.
Her face, carved angelically,
Fixed every fate doth fought.

Worry that she does not show,
For she gives not one care
That I shall last one minute more,
Just so I can share
The dreams, for ‘tis just a minute more,
I will last without a tear.

Yes, she has known through time.
Time brought a weary end
To the gift I sought together,
To the ward of being a friend.

She walks as if she knows
That I have but one minute left,
But does not give a second thought
Until the time of death.
©2007-2009 ~amor1of1pen
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Dedication: NA

Written: May 23, 2007

Behind the Writing: This is based off a past poem that is not on dA. I would post it, but I need to type it in my computer. And at this moment, the paper is at school in my desk in the front pocket of my binder. (I hope...)

Although I use words such as 'she,' 'her,' and 'friend', it's not TECHNICALLY dedicated to an actual friend of mine. It's just a collection of thoughts that I can't get out without putting it poetically. So it's not about anyone that you could guess...alright? Alright.

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:iconettolrahctedarkqueen:
wow. i think i'm gonna have to fave it. twice!

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you're dead! have you heared the news that you're dead? no one ever had nice words to say, i think they never liked you anyway.

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:iconamor1of1pen:
:hug: Thanks a bunch! I'm glad you like it enough to fave it....(twice..lol)

:heart: :D

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"Where has that old friend gone? Lost in a February Song. Tell him it won't be long till he opens his eyes."
:iconettolrahctedarkqueen:
what can i say? it's a really good poem (like all your poetry) and i'm eccentric!

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you're dead! have you heared the news that you're dead? no one ever had nice words to say, i think they never liked you anyway.

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:iconamor1of1pen:
THANK YOU! :hug:
Your poetry is more amazing than anything I can write. I can barely keep up! :)

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"Where has that old friend gone? Lost in a February Song. Tell him it won't be long till he opens his eyes."
:iconettolrahctedarkqueen:
so talented, and so modest! i love that about you!

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you're dead! have you heared the news that you're dead? no one ever had nice words to say, i think they never liked you anyway.

(\__/) This is Bunny. Copy Bunny into
(O.o ) your signature to help him
(> < ) on his way to world domination!
:iconamor1of1pen:
Thanks! Right back at you...:aww: :hug:

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"Where has that old friend gone? Lost in a February Song. Tell him it won't be long till he opens his eyes."
:iconlordbeazy:
A beautiful swirl of words that entrance with eloquent tenderness. :) :rose:

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:iconamor1of1pen:
And nothing bad happens. :)
Thank you! :hug: :rose:

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